An interesting game, indeed.I like the possibility that we have to help him, and the message passed on was important, the style of writing and the poem were intriguing and incredible.I hope another project like this is done by you, Author!
Hi! I'm so so sorry for the late reply :'( Thank you so much for playing my game! I'm really happy you liked it; your comment is so sweet :') Thank you, thank you!
:'( Maybe check your popup blocker? If not, then I'm not sure what's wrong,, If you're still interested in playing the game, I can provide a google drive link for you!
Alright, here we go. I will say that the design in this game is fantastic! Even tho art is done in black and white tone I still love it. But one thing that is making me a bit uncomfortable is the lack of backgounds. Despite that, everything looks marvelous and unique.
It said that there are multiple endings based on the choices you make, and it is true. I was suprised to see many options for the dialogue. And also I enjoy the fact that in the text box sentence appears fully, not typing some time. What I'm trying to say is that it may be easier to read.
Summing up, I want to say that this novel is worth playing. It is short, but it's good. I'm looking forward to see more games like this one!
Thank you very much for liking it! :D I did intend for backgrounds to be minimal in this game, but I will admit that there was too much dead space :') I'll try to make more soon! Again, thank you for your review!
literally the only interesting vn on this entire site aside from butterfly soup - it makes me so happy to finally see someone here with a unique art style! i just get a different feeling from the uniqueness of the atmosphere u provided in this game, it's seriously immaculate, despite being nothing too detailed or overly colorful, this is exactly the type of minimalism we need in games. plus it places a better emphasis on the dialogue, which is much appreciated in comparison to the drier, less creative stories i've seen upon scrolling endlessly to find something remotely worth investing time into.
i would love to see u create more wonderful things! u have so much talent, thank you for your hard work, it means a lot to actually find a worthwhile visual novel !!
Oh wow, thank you! I'm happy that you found it interesting! I am planning to make another game, although it will need some time before release of course, haha. Again, thank you for your comments, I appreciate them a lot :')
Fascinating Visual Novel! My favorite thing about this is the art. I love the character design of the stranger and all the expressions the stranger has. I could feel all the emotions the character was going through with the animations for them. I think that’s a pretty difficult thing to achieve sometimes, but here, it’s conveyed perfectly in my opinion.
The writing is well done as well, it paints a great picture, but I did feel a bit lost sometimes. I’m unsure if some parts were meant to be vague and left up to interpretation. (I am not the best at reading comprehension admittedly, so this could very well be my own fault.) One improvement I think could be made is the dialogue choices. Some of them felt a bit too vague and the intention of some choices were difficult to understand. I think it’s one of those things where the situation itself could be interpreted in different ways but the intention of inquiring information or asking the stranger certain things could be more direct.
One more note, would it be possible to allow the game to be installed and launched through the itch.io app?
Regardless, great work! It was a very interesting experience!
Hi! Thank you so much for playing my game! :D I’m so happy right now aaaa I’m really glad you liked it!
Thank you as well for your feedback! Yes, I did intend for the writing and the choices to be vague, but I got carried away with it here :’) When I possibly make my next game, I’ll keep your words in mind!
As for the itch.io app, I’m not quite sure as to how to do that, since this is my first time; I’m assuming that it can’t :’(. But next time, I’ll look into it further!
Again, thank you very very much! This means a lot to me :’))
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An interesting game, indeed. I like the possibility that we have to help him, and the message passed on was important, the style of writing and the poem were intriguing and incredible. I hope another project like this is done by you, Author!
Hi! I'm so so sorry for the late reply :'( Thank you so much for playing my game! I'm really happy you liked it; your comment is so sweet :') Thank you, thank you!
Aww, I thank you!
Oh :'( maybe your computer isn't compatible? The game is only for Windows, unfortunately.
:'( Maybe check your popup blocker? If not, then I'm not sure what's wrong,, If you're still interested in playing the game, I can provide a google drive link for you!
u have to download it in a browser instead of the actual itchio application
Alright, here we go. I will say that the design in this game is fantastic! Even tho art is done in black and white tone I still love it. But one thing that is making me a bit uncomfortable is the lack of backgounds. Despite that, everything looks marvelous and unique.
It said that there are multiple endings based on the choices you make, and it is true. I was suprised to see many options for the dialogue. And also I enjoy the fact that in the text box sentence appears fully, not typing some time. What I'm trying to say is that it may be easier to read.
Summing up, I want to say that this novel is worth playing. It is short, but it's good. I'm looking forward to see more games like this one!
Thank you very much for liking it! :D I did intend for backgrounds to be minimal in this game, but I will admit that there was too much dead space :') I'll try to make more soon! Again, thank you for your review!
literally the only interesting vn on this entire site aside from butterfly soup - it makes me so happy to finally see someone here with a unique art style! i just get a different feeling from the uniqueness of the atmosphere u provided in this game, it's seriously immaculate, despite being nothing too detailed or overly colorful, this is exactly the type of minimalism we need in games. plus it places a better emphasis on the dialogue, which is much appreciated in comparison to the drier, less creative stories i've seen upon scrolling endlessly to find something remotely worth investing time into.
i would love to see u create more wonderful things! u have so much talent, thank you for your hard work, it means a lot to actually find a worthwhile visual novel !!
Oh wow, thank you! I'm happy that you found it interesting! I am planning to make another game, although it will need some time before release of course, haha. Again, thank you for your comments, I appreciate them a lot :')
Thank you for playing! :') I'm really glad you liked it <3
Fascinating Visual Novel! My favorite thing about this is the art. I love the character design of the stranger and all the expressions the stranger has. I could feel all the emotions the character was going through with the animations for them. I think that’s a pretty difficult thing to achieve sometimes, but here, it’s conveyed perfectly in my opinion.
The writing is well done as well, it paints a great picture, but I did feel a bit lost sometimes. I’m unsure if some parts were meant to be vague and left up to interpretation. (I am not the best at reading comprehension admittedly, so this could very well be my own fault.) One improvement I think could be made is the dialogue choices. Some of them felt a bit too vague and the intention of some choices were difficult to understand. I think it’s one of those things where the situation itself could be interpreted in different ways but the intention of inquiring information or asking the stranger certain things could be more direct.
One more note, would it be possible to allow the game to be installed and launched through the itch.io app?
Regardless, great work! It was a very interesting experience!
Hi! Thank you so much for playing my game! :D I’m so happy right now aaaa I’m really glad you liked it!
Thank you as well for your feedback! Yes, I did intend for the writing and the choices to be vague, but I got carried away with it here :’) When I possibly make my next game, I’ll keep your words in mind!
As for the itch.io app, I’m not quite sure as to how to do that, since this is my first time; I’m assuming that it can’t :’(. But next time, I’ll look into it further!
Again, thank you very very much! This means a lot to me :’))